Monday, August 29, 2011

Sweet Jane

     Jane Eyre was one of the books I read from the summer list. I choose it for two main reasons, one perhaps more justifiable than the other. First, the song "Don't Tell Me To Do The Math(s)" by Los Campesinos quite explicitly states, "If only you would give your life to literature just / Don't read Jane Eyre! / Work on your algebra," which piqued my interest in what could possibly warrant such a vehement command. Second, I was reading Pride and Prejudice on a whim and got to the 100th page before deciding I needed to find a new book at all costs, and from its first page Janes Eyre Bronte seemed the anti-Austen. To tell the story of the struggles through the world of an orphan child, not the quest for marriage of one of however many priveleged girls.
     Jane Eyre's storytelling also turned out to be largely good, nontrivially discussing the issues of the poor and the downtrodden, although its later tendings towards being over romanticised claptrap are less than stellar. From the beginning, the way in which Jane is rebuffed from the perfectly innocent question of what she had done wrong, "Jane, I don’t like cavillers or questioners; besides, there is something truly forbidding in a child taking up her elders in that manner," establishes in so few words the character of the harsh Mrs. Reed. Jane's views towards the poor are also very well established at this very beginning of the novel, this excerpt especially shows off Bronte's talents, "I shook my head: I could not see how poor people had the means of being kind; and then to learn to speak like them, to adopt their manners, to be uneducated [...]: no, I was not heroic enough to purchase liberty at the price of caste." Later, this makes Jane's descent into poverty all the more vivid as she begs for food and lodging despite being educated. However, it is also later that Jane Eyre becomes an unabashedly romantic novel, with such saccharine speeches that quite honestly boggle the mind. One especially stands out, where Jane's lover, Mr. Rochester is leaving her, "'Good-night, my--' He stopped, bit his lip, and abruptly left me." This passage uses one the most cliche phrases ever, biting one's lip. While it may not have been as outrageously overused at the time Jane Eyre was written, it is still to modern tastes outdated at best.
     Overall, however, the romantic ramblings of Jane Eyre don't outweigh its very thought-provoking analysis of poverty in the 19th century. While it is unfortunate to have to excuse the tendencies of a book based on other strengths, in this case the overall storytelling and plot are simply greater than the minor sappy Romanticism. All in all, this book was quite worth reading despite the warnings of Los Campesinos and was far superior to the always on cliched romance of the horrible Pride and Prejudice

4 comments:

  1. A few thoughts, James-
    1. I really liked your opening. I thought you added a clever twist on "why did you pick it." I also thought your last line in your conclusion was a great way to tie the ending to the beginning of your essay.

    2. However, I think you need to expand on your thoughts. Can you go into the language, the ending, the plot a little more? I think you need to develop your argument a little more; it seems a little sparse how it is. Go deeper; analyze the work as a story a little more.

    Overall, I think you have a great start. I enjoyed your writing style very much and the structure is well-constructed.

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  2. Dearest James,

    I love your reference to Los Campesinos, because they just so happen to be one of my favorite bands. I appreciate your linkage between the introduction and conclusion. Atta kid! As far as a main idea, I think you should expand upon the subject of the poor. I find it intriguing! I understand this is just the start to something great, but here are a few minor suggestions: (take them or leave them)

    -polish up the transitions.. for example "second" could become "another reason I _____ed was..."

    -more examples of cliche expressions and over-romanticization

    -try more interesting verbs.. maybe change "don't" to "did not effectively..."

    -expand on the conclusion's overrall "so what?"

    In the end, this draft is doing everything it is supposed to be doing! Now it is time to polish, refine, and tweak!

    Hope I was helpful,
    Nicole Bu.

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  4. Hi James,
    You have a good writing style and a very good start to your essay. I think you have the right ideas, but you need to express them more. Talk more about how this book's unique topic is refreshing, tell what makes it interesting,is it better than "Pride and Prejudice" only because it isn't all about romance or is there more to it like writing style and world views?
    I like your introduction because it does pull the reader in, and your conclusion is a perfect way to end the essay, but maybe beef up the body paragraphs a little bit?
    I hope I helped a little,
    Sierra

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